Friday, July 19, 2013

Chase or Dare? Annabeth Chase versus Rachel Elizabeth Dare


            If you’re looking to debate who is a better partner in crime—in both quests and romance—for Percy Jackson, this is not the post for you.  If you hold any doubt on that front, I would honestly be surprised.  I have never doubted from page one who Percy was fated to be with.

            When Rachel Elizabeth Dare was introduced in The Titan’s Curse, I won’t deny that I was intrigued.  As the books proceed, these two characters, arguably the two most important (teenage) females in Percy’s life, are compared and contrasted increasingly more often.  When I originally read the series a few years ago, I hadn’t paid much attention to this.  The second time around I couldn’t help but be intrigued by the questions Riordan was raising:  not just who’s better for Percy, but who is the better girl?

            When I first heard Rachel’s name mentioned on my second read through, all I could remember from years previous was that I liked her, and that I was excited for her to come into play.  The instant we met a girl with crazy red hair, I was ecstatic.  And then I kept reading. 

As time went on, I feared Rachel was doomed to follow in the footsteps of so many redheads gone by.  Much like Amy Pond, Rachel has a tendency to fall in to the cliché of the Fronting Feisty Female (FFF for short).  The FFF is a character who talks a good act—very brave, very forceful, indefinitely right—but when forced to walk this talk, they struggle.  They are often in peril and very rarely manage to get themselves out of these situations.  The FFF instead relies on their typically male protagonist to save them.  There were several instances in which I thought Rachel may be going down this path.  For instance, in The Last Olympian, Rachel’s in a crashing helicopter and Annabeth, being the amazingly generous demigod that she is, goes to her rescue.  But, upon reflection after finishing The Last Olympian, I realized I was being a bit biased towards Rachel.  For goodness sakes, she was in a crashing helicopter!  I kept yelling at the book for her to get up and do something about it.  But, thinking a little more logically, I tried to take a step back and realize how terrifying that situation must’ve been.

            It was then that I had a realization about Annabeth.  She’s such an excellent warrior and fighter that, in the narrative of the series, you can’t help but think all women should be that marvelous.  And most of them are—Clarisse, Katie, even Silena are all very strong, all worthy of their own posts.  Rachel, as excellent as she is for a mortal, she is, in fact, just that—a mortal.  She’s very straightforward, very helpful and resourceful, brave and demanding.  All of these are good things, especially when it means she can successfully throw a hairbrush at Kronos and manage to incapacitate him in some form.

            Unfortunately for Rachel, Annabeth is just a little bit better, at just about everything.  I recently read an article about the Exceptional Woman, which was fascinating.  But, at the same time, it shattered the illusion surrounding a lot of my favorite female characters.  Annabeth is one such example.  While there are several other girls at Camp Half-Blood, for a majority of the early books you get the sense that it is Annabeth alone, playing at the boys game of being a hero.  She waits and waits for her first quest, something she doesn’t truly receive until The Battle of the Labyrinth, might I add.  In the meantime, she works to keep Percy and Grover alive, all the while doing things far better than either of those two can put together. While I don’t think Annabeth is solely an Exceptional Woman, she certainly has some aspects of the trope. 

            Annabeth’s saving grace from fully receiving the Exceptional Woman title is that she mourns, she cries, she isn’t perfect 100% of the time.  She lingers far too long on the Luke issue, which makes her far more human than the Exceptional Woman is allowed to be.  She feels genuine betrayal and guilt over what has happened to Luke.  While this is the biggest struggle the character goes through, it’s what I like best about her.  Not all girls fall for a demigod who turns evil and is, therefore, forbidden territory; girls do, however, fall for boys who turn out to be meaner than they were originally thought to be.  It’s very realistic and it’s written to be very believable.  It humanizes her.

            Contrastingly, while Rachel appears to feel pain over her father and her confusion towards her feelings for Percy, she suffers in a far less believable way.  We see her suffer about her father, but this story doesn’t have the closure the Annabeth/Luke saga does.  This takes weight off of her suffering and makes it seem shallow in some way.  She proves that she is willing to go to the end of the world for Percy and his cause, but she takes little effort to get to know the others at camp, (at least in the first series, that is) making her motivations appear to be nothing but feelings for a boy, or ambitions to be anything but mortal part of the “in crowd” that is the demigods. 

Unfortunately, the thing I love most about Rachel is what makes her less relatable as a character—she’s beautifully straightforward, going so far as to essentially ask Percy what a girl has to do to get him to kiss her.  While I love this about her and I wish more women were like this, I fear they aren’t, even after exiting the dreadful teenage years.  It takes a lot of courage to lay things out on the line like that, and it’s an attribute not many people actually have. 

            Annabeth, while not as straightforward as Rachel, has a different and distinct sort of directness about her.  Instead of asking Percy what it takes to get him to kiss her, she just decides to kiss him herself.  That clearly takes even more courage than Rachel’s question and answer process.  However, the factor of a life and death situation in Mt. St. Helen’s should be considered as well.  The cause of Annabeth’s directness is what is possibly even more crucial than the honesty itself.  Annabeth is, of course, very wise.  She knows the weight of words; once something is said, it can never be taken back.  Part of the reason I think she waits so long to give an answer to Percy’s questions about Luke is that she is still processing.  That being said, once Annabeth is done processing and has come to an answer, you can rely on that answer to be the sole truth, without any hesitation.  I don’t know if it makes her more relatable, but it certainly makes her more reliable. 

From Bella to Katniss:  Are Annabeth and Rachel good role models?  Let’s start with Annabeth.  Annabeth is perhaps the best young adult role model to come along since Hermione Granger.  She’s intelligent.  She may or may not be pretty—she doesn’t really care, but she knows that she’s got her brains and that she can use those to do whatever she wants, whether it be defeating monsters or building the new Olympus.  She struggles with love, but she doesn’t let it run her life.  How could she?  She’s got monsters to beat and a world to save.  The only hindrance I can see with Annabeth is, despite the fact that she claims to never be anybody’s sidekick, she really is almost always second in command to Percy.  It isn’t until the Heroes of Olympus series that this becomes less true.  When Percy is gone, all the campers immediately turn to Annabeth as their authority.  That says a lot about her character. 
Role Model Rating:  8/10

Rachel certainly has some redeeming role model characteristics.  She’s brave and loyal.  She’s artistic and fights for the causes she believes in with all her heart.  Honesty is high on her list of priorities; if she has a thought in her head, it’s coming out of mouth—not necessarily in a rude manner, she’s actually really rather nice.  This is possibly her best quality, the quality that almost makes her a better role model than Annabeth.  But I just can’t quite bring myself to rate her higher, as there’s some ambiguous quality to Miss Dare that leaves her just automatically ranking below Annabeth in my book.
Role Model Rating:  6/10

From Lorelai to Wonder Woman:  Are Annabeth and Rachel relatable?  Once again, we’ll start with Annabeth.  Annabeth’s immense struggle with what has happened to Luke makes her a very relatable character.  Notice, I did not say her struggle with what has happened to Luke and what that means in terms of her potential feelings for Percy.  For me, the truth she reveals to Luke at the end of The Last Olympian implies that those things were never truly connected to her.  She didn’t have lingering feelings for Luke that were preventing her from liking Percy; she had lingering guilt over what she could’ve done to help Luke that prevented her from pursuing anything romantic until she could sort him out.  This takes Percy out of the equation entirely, which actually makes her struggle with Luke far more authentic.  It’s driven by her own guilt, not her feelings for some outside party that didn’t really know the Luke she knew.  Add the fact that she feels personally responsible, and you’ve got a heap load of relatable factors.  On the other hand, she’s so brilliant at, well, everything that she can sometimes be difficult to connect with. 
Relatability Rating:  7/10

Unfortunately for Rachel, the quality that makes her almost the better role model of the two hits her harder when it comes to being relatable.  While I adore her straightforward attitude, it is something seen very infrequently in the real world.  She does, however, stand by her convictions and her causes.  There is also the added factor that she is the only Mortal to do several things—enter Camp Half-Blood, ascend to a position of power in their world and fight in the battle, amongst other things.  This has the audience rooting for her, as she gives us mere mortals an opportunity to join the world as well. 
Relatability Rating:  6/10




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